Bog, whoever you are, thank you for fixing it. Thank you for telling us that the wanting survives the wound.
| What to Do | Why It Helps | |------------|--------------| | without editing. | Gives you the overall feel, pacing, and emotional impact. | | Take notes on the margins (or a separate doc). | Jot down anything that feels “off” – confusing dialogue, abrupt scene changes, repeated words, etc. | | Identify the core hook (the moment that makes the reader want to keep reading). | If the hook is weak, you’ll know where to strengthen it later. | broken hearts still want to love ch 1 by bog fixed
People told him a change of scenery would help. So he’d moved from Chicago to the West Coast, trading wind for drizzle, and brought his restoration business with him. Bog, whoever you are, thank you for fixing it